I think that your pitch delivery was undoubtedly well-paced and easy to follow. I also think that you provided a valid reason why people should consider to buy your product, to the extent that you even talked about the different flavors that should appeal to a wider customer base. On the other hand, I think that for your next pitch you can improve a couple of things. First, you should consider using a camera at eyesight so you can have a better eye contact with your customers. Finally, I think that you can work on a better hook to grab your audience at the beginning of the pitch. I hope that you can find my recommendations helpful!
Hi Max, I think you presented your product in a clear and understanding way. The product was outlined well along with its purpose and market. However, I believe you ran into some problems with the physical delivery of your pitch, some of which I too encountered. Similarly I found that I had to keep looking back and forth from a script. One tip for next time would be to position the camera to be able to see your whole body, other than that great work. Best, Reed Blevins
Hey Max, I believe your introduction of the product was great and you described it in a way that is very easy to understand. You pitched your idea in a great way by making it sound like a necessity in our everyday lives and you backed it up with conclusive reasons. I did feel like you were looking back and forth from the camera a lot, especially towards the end. I had a some trouble with this as well and it helps practicing it by ear so you don't have to look away as often or by adjusting the camera angles. All in all, great first pitch! Samuel Ackenine
Hello Max,
ReplyDeleteI think that your pitch delivery was undoubtedly well-paced and easy to follow. I also think that you provided a valid reason why people should consider to buy your product, to the extent that you even talked about the different flavors that should appeal to a wider customer base. On the other hand, I think that for your next pitch you can improve a couple of things. First, you should consider using a camera at eyesight so you can have a better eye contact with your customers. Finally, I think that you can work on a better hook to grab your audience at the beginning of the pitch. I hope that you can find my recommendations helpful!
Sincerely,
Javier Felis Perez
Hi Max,
ReplyDeleteI think you presented your product in a clear and understanding way. The product was outlined well along with its purpose and market. However, I believe you ran into some problems with the physical delivery of your pitch, some of which I too encountered. Similarly I found that I had to keep looking back and forth from a script. One tip for next time would be to position the camera to be able to see your whole body, other than that great work.
Best,
Reed Blevins
Hey Max,
ReplyDeleteI believe your introduction of the product was great and you described it in a way that is very easy to understand. You pitched your idea in a great way by making it sound like a necessity in our everyday lives and you backed it up with conclusive reasons. I did feel like you were looking back and forth from the camera a lot, especially towards the end. I had a some trouble with this as well and it helps practicing it by ear so you don't have to look away as often or by adjusting the camera angles. All in all, great first pitch!
Samuel Ackenine